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=== Lal ===
 
[[File:Lal female.jpg|thumb|Lal in 2366]]
 
'''[[Lal]]''' was a Soong-type android constructed by Data in 2366 on the USS Enterprise-D. She exceeded Data's abilities in several ways, notably by being able to complete more than sixty trillion calculations per second, using contractions, and feeling emotions such as fear and love.
 
 
The idea to create Lal originated when Data learned of a newly-developed submicron matrix transfer technology at a cybernetics conference he had attended. Using his own positronic brain as a template, Data thereby programmed the brain of the android that would ultimately be known as Lal. His initial tests proved successful, leading him to continue with the ambitious project.
 
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I have been working on this article off and on. I think it's pretty comprehensive now. --[[User:LauraCC|LauraCC]] ([[User talk:LauraCC|talk]]) 20:49, January 3, 2018 (UTC)
 
*'''Oppose''', [[MA:FAC|not everything is cited]]. - {{User:Archduk3/Sig/nature}} 18:42, January 4, 2018 (UTC)
 
I looked in the history, but at first glance, I couldn't find who initially added that reference to the name meaning. If I just removed that uncited info pending citation, would the rest of the article be acceptable otherwise? --[[User:LauraCC|LauraCC]] ([[User talk:LauraCC|talk]]) 17:07, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
 
*'''Oppose''': Almost all of the text is lacking sources and the narrative itself for me just doesn't seem to flow very well by repeating names and phrases that were used earlier. There is also something about the layout/formatting that just appears a little haphazard and messy though I can't seem to put my finger on what exactly. I don't think this article compares to similar FAs covering minor characters but with a little work there is nothing stopping it from becoming featured in the future. --| [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] <sup>[[User Talk:TrekFan|<span style="color:#00FF00;">Open a channel</span>]]</sup> 13:49, January 23, 2018 (UTC)
 
:'''Comment''': I have just added a bit more background information to the article which I have found in other sources. I think this alone indicates the article is incomplete. I just think more work needs to be done to it before it can be promoted as an example of MA's best work. --| [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] <sup>[[User Talk:TrekFan|<span style="color:#00FF00;">Open a channel</span>]]</sup> 08:12, February 5, 2018 (UTC)
 
Regarding the lack of sources; most of the in-universe article's subject matter is from the same episode. Unless you mean sources for behind the scenes info. Is there anything else I can do? --[[User:LauraCC|LauraCC]] ([[User talk:LauraCC|talk]]) 17:08, January 23, 2018 (UTC)
 
*'''Oppose'''. The article seems quite complete but somehow I don't believe this article could show some of the community's best work. [[User:ThomasHL|Tom]] ([[User talk:ThomasHL|talk]]) 18:11, January 27, 2018 (UTC)
 

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Nominations without objections

Hawk (Lieutenant)

Hawk, 2373

Lieutenant Hawk

Hawk was a Human male who served as conn officer on the USS Enterprise-E in 2373. In that capacity, he served on the bridge of the ship during the Battle of Sector 001.

Although the invading Borg cube was eventually destroyed by a fleet of Starfleet vessels, one Borg sphere managed to escape on a direct heading towards Earth. Hawk piloted the Enterprise in pursuit of the sphere which subsequently created a temporal vortex through the controlled emission of chronometric particles. On the instruction of his captain, Hawk piloted the ship into the vortex where it emerged in the year 2063.

The Borg's plan was quickly realized - to go back in time and assimilate humanity when it was vulnerable. The Enterprise was able to destroy the Borg sphere but not before a group of drones was able to beam aboard the ship and begin efforts to construct an interplexing beacon with which to contact the Borg of that era.

Together with Captain Jean-Luc Picard and Lieutenant Commander Worf, Hawk went out onto the ship's hull to stop the Borg from modifying the Enterprise's deflector into a beacon. During the fight, Hawk was pulled over the side of the ship and assimilated. Now a drone, he set about trying to stop his former colleagues but was ultimately killed by Worf.


Self-nomination: While this is an article about a minor character that only appeared in a few scenes, there is a wealth of interesting background information about him which contributes to the article as a whole. I have scraped through all of the reference material I can find and I believe this is now as complete as the article is going to get and worthy of FA status. --| TrekFan Open a channel 04:31, February 5, 2018 (UTC)

  • Support. - Archduk3 22:57, February 6, 2018 (UTC)

Nominations with objections

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