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***Actually that was me. I put it through the paper template I have been using for putting starship class pages together. And again, I still think it needs a lot more images to go with the sections that are being referred to. --[[User:Gvsualan|Alan del Beccio]] 01:07, 23 Sep 2005 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' re:Enzo. Apart from most (all?) of the sidebar information, we have the content of the "history" section (I doubt that was mentioned in the episode. If it was, it should at least be moved, a section consisting of just one sentence is too short). Also, at least the content of the introduction ("designed as ...", "used for ..."; do we ''really'' know that?) and probably more of the technical details. I also added another point to my original objection. -- [[User:Cid Highwind|Cid Highwind]] 10:15, 23 Sep 2005 (UTC)
===[[Wormhole relay station]]===
*'''Self-nomination'''. It may not qualify in length or entertainment, but after I wrote the first draft, it seemed remarkably complete, and I feel it's as well written as [[Bajoran wormhole]] and [[Dreadnought (missile)]]. History, logistics, service record, trivia, it's all there. --[[User:Oshah|Oshah]] 09:29, 15 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Support''' [[User:Valley Forge|Valley Forge]] 09:56, 15 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*<strike>'''Neutral'''. I think it needs some minor editing and slight expansions before its really ready for prime-time but not much. [[User:Logan 5|Logan 5]] 13:28, 15 Sep 2005 (UTC)</strike>
**Changing to '''Support'''. Most of my quibbles with the language have been taken care of by subesquent edits. [[User:Logan 5|Logan 5]] 19:12, 15 Sep 2005 (UTC)
* '''Support''', I quite like it. Maybe some odd turns of phrase, but nothing content-wise that should prevent it. — '''[[User:pd_THOR|<span style="color:#CC0000;">THOR</span>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:pd_THOR|<span style="color:#FF9933;">''=/\=''</span>]]</sup> 14:42, 15 Sep 2005 (UTC)
**Is the pic appropriate? The image's description says it's the [[Amargosa observatory]], which makes no mention of the wormhole or DS9. --[[User:Schrei|Schrei]] 03:04, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
***It's only the name of the picture, the relay station and amargosa observatory are the one and the same model that was used to portrait it. -- [[User:Q|Q]] 07:23, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
****I've added an extra note to the image description page to remove confusion.--[[User:Oshah|Oshah]] 09:21, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*****Actually, though the Amargosa Observatory was re-used in this episode, the model was modified. The 2 long structures at the side were shortened drastically, furthermore, the relay station lacks the metal ropes that run from the two long antennae to a protruding spike at the center of the station. This spike was removed, along with those metal ropes, when the Amargosa Observatory was turned into the Subspace relay station. I'm brandnew to Memory Alpha, so forgive me, if I do anything wrong, but I uploaded a few screenshots of the Subspace relay station that show the differences and might also be useful for this excellent article. -- [[User:Jörg|Jörg]] 16:53, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
******We'll need to know the copyright to those pictures before we can use them. (judging by the resolution, they look like screenshots to me), therefore, we may be able to apply the <nowiki>{{msgparamount}}</nowiki> template there.--[[User:Oshah|Oshah]] 16:04, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*******Yep, those are screenshots from the DS9 Season 3 DVDs, I took them today.--[[User:Jörg|Jörg]] 16:11, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Support''' [[User:Jörg|Jörg]] 18:34, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Support'''. A great example of what the non-episode FAs should be. Well done everyone who contributed to it. --[[User:Schrei|Schrei]] 18:38, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Mild Objection''' - Sorry if this sounds disorganized, I wrote it as I read the article -- I've combed through this article quite thoroughly because I really want to see this succeed, and I've noticed several contributions to this article that are '''completely unrelated''' to the relay station. This includes: the entire section about "Trakor's Third Prophecy", which seems to be more about Bajoran religion -- and a mini summary of "[[Destiny]]", also other minute sentences like: "Gilora and Ulani returned to the Cardassian Science Ministry" (which I removed), and stuff like that. Regarding the Bajoran religion section, I was hoping we could discuss that before so that I could change my vote, as I really feel that does not belong in this article. And yes, althought it is related, it really should just be linked to the article through the appropriate links and not given an entire paragraph. Also, I've reorganized the article some by moving the logistics section above the service record section, as it made more sense to have it there. I also moved the italicized comments at the bottom of the page into the background section and edited some of the grammar and spelling. --[[User:Gvsualan|Alan del Beccio]] 19:34, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' I think that some of those edits (eg, moving the Logistics section and removing some of the extraneous info on Gilora and Ulani) are justified. However, I think the Trakor's prophecy piece definitely belongs there. It was a central story to the deployment of the station and almost prevented it from being deployed at all. Perhaps the entire text of the prophecy doesn't belong, but certainly mentioning it and referencing how it was interpreted and mis-interpreted regarding this specific station is crucial to a full reading of the article. [[User:Logan 5|Logan 5]] 20:22, 16 Sep 2005 (UTC)
**'''Comment''' Removed some of the prophecy and made an relation between it and the relay station project. How about now ? -- [[User:Q|Q]] 13:19, 17 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Support''' [[User:Jaf|Jaf]] 15:22, 17 Sep 2005 (UTC)Jaf
**'''Comment'''-I think I trimmed the episode summary part off of it. '''(anon)'''
***Reading it as it stands now, I'm not sure if anon took out too much or not enough. It feels like some of the prophecy story is in it and some not. I'm tempted to take it even furtther and remove everything except that Yarka predicted doom and Sisko proved him wrong. That would leave it awfully short though... --[[User:Schrei|Schrei]] 04:43, 18 Sep 2005 (UTC)
**'''Comment''': I'm curious, are this images intended to be used for anything: [[:Image:Wormhole relay station 3.jpg]]; [[:Image:Wormhole relay station 5.jpg]]; [[:Image:Wormhole relay station 1.jpg]]? --[[User:Gvsualan|Alan del Beccio]] 07:04, 18 Sep 2005 (UTC)
***With the exception of [[:Image:Wormhole relay station 5.jpg|Img5]] (swapped with [[:Image:Wormhole relay station 2.jpg|Img2]]), I doubt I will use those graphics for the article. They're not exactly great images, and the information they convey seem to be covered by the other pictures. I'd vote to have them deleted. --[[User:Oshah|Oshah]] 12:23, 18 Sep 2005 (UTC)
****I have already added them to the image to delete page. -- [[User:Q|Q]] 17:04, 18 Sep 2005 (UTC)
*'''Support'''. Whatever the person with the objection was talking about must have been fixed, nothing wrong with it now. :o) [[User:Ben Sisqo|Ben Sisqo]] 01:27, 24 Sep 2005 (UTC)
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