PNA Edit

This needs a rewrite. The article should begin with a sentence or two introducing the subject and clearly stating his contribution to Star Trek. It took me a while to figure out why I should care about this guy and his website. This leads into my second point, which is that the article has an incorrect focus. This page should be first and foremost about McCullars' articles in licensed magazines, and then it could mention things like his website and fanzine contributions.–Cleanse ( talk | contribs ) 23:40, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Those points have been addressed, so I have removed the PNA.–Cleanse ( talk | contribs ) 00:18, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

A sincere thank you has been left on your talk page.--Sennim 01:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)